华丽且睿智，keeping a low profile without being 矫情，好！
-oiseau(月舞飞天);
2012-2-5(#7263526@0)
Sorry keep you waiting. Your enjoyment is my motivation to write. Thank you.
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-2-5(#7263335@0)
I checked out again your (2) last night, fun to read again. I do enjoy it but may not be as sensitive when I comment as to match up your expectation. my english is all practical, very much. our sets of vocabulary are quite different. Fun to know though.
-c__wang(愚若智);
2012-2-5(#7263387@0)
同感。fun to read, fun to know
-coolmao(酷猫*Z-ha-dum);
2012-2-5(#7263422@0)
As always, Eric's refined English writting deserves a round of applause. This time,for some reason, I didn't get a lot of laugh I usually could expect with reading hismaterials, but that".....she was able to contact someone in the factory whose niece was working in the same unit with someone whose father had went to war together with someone whose son was working in the Education Bureau and....." was truly a memory refresher leading to a bitter smile...looking forward to part 4
-oiseau(月舞飞天);
2012-2-5{318}(#7263323@0)
I have dug up a lot of dirt, haven’t I? Tuning in in 4 :)
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-2-5(#7263439@0)
吹毛求疵 is ok, that is why I post my story here. Everything I wrote is up for debate. Any comments are welcome here.吹毛求疵
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-2-5{8}(#7263347@0)
Good morning snob.
-2ertg(whxn);
2012-2-7(#7267495@0)
A snobis someone who believes that some people are inherently inferior to him or her for any one of a variety of reasons, including real or supposed intellect, wealth, education, ancestry, taste, beauty, nationality, etcetera. Often, the form of snobbery reflects the snob's personal attributes. For example, a common snobbery of the affluent is the belief that wealth is either the cause or result of superiority, or both...
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-2-7{420}(#7267496@0)
I simply call you (and -wincity(红卫兵)) sn00bs, or rickhies.
-2ertg(whxn);
2012-2-7(#7267498@0)
Just a joke, you cannot be serious, Boss!
-2ertg(whxn);
2012-2-7(#7267506@0)
A real black humor. Hahaha.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-2-7(#7267530@0)
A newbieis a slang term for a novice or newcomer, or somebody inexperienced in any profession or activity. Contemporary use can particularly refer to a beginner or new user of computers, often concerning Internet activity, such as online gaming[1] or Linux use.[2][3] It can have derogatory connotations, but is also often used for descriptive purposes only, without a value judgment...
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-2-7{378}(#7267499@0)
I am happy with it.. you? rickhies
-2ertg(whxn);
2012-2-7(#7267501@0)
Eric, your writing is as fluid as ever but I have to admit I did not enjoy reading this piece as much as the previous ones. There should always be a light of hope in a dark and depressing story.
-slowdownforrose(放慢脚步);
2012-2-5(#7263598@0)
I may have focused too much on twists and turns of the events, unintentionally leaving it “darker” than previous episodes. I will see if I can “brighten up” in (4). Chance is good since “I” would be in a good junior high.
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-2-5(#7263928@0)
I’m not criticizing your writing skill. The story presents itself to be a tragedy. The dark background carried over from part 1 to part 3. It’s just there was always something bright and beautiful shone through the darkness in the first 2 episodesthat gave the readers warmth and hope. I did not see it in part 3. Without it the story would become a remote and twisted dream that is irrelevant to today’s audience. Just my 2 cents. BTW, you indeed have a large vocabulary that I had to go back to dictionaries to check out a few words.
-slowdownforrose(放慢脚步);
2012-2-6{292}(#7265049@0)
Eric 用词很恰如其分的，你不懂，说明你的词汇量不够。
-wincity(红卫兵);
2012-2-6(#7267264@0)
我已经说了是我的英语问题。但是如果是学习交流，可以稍微简单y点. I ever read Randy Pausch's the Last Lecture and Hillary's Living History. I find it is relatively easier reading those two books.
-sunny0056(sunny);
2012-2-6(#7267294@0)
我非常同意你...写故事,写书都是为了让读者易懂,不是law document, 要precise,还有最好你不懂. LZ喜欢用big word on a simple story, 读起来很凹口, take away the enjoyment of reading a good story.
-jesse_dd(紫飞鱼);
2012-2-7(#7268375@0)
You don't give up, do you? My description of you still stands. I tried to ignore you and you are like a cockroach, keep popping up. Now, you are truly obnoxious and disturbed.
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-2-8(#7270673@0)
Too bad for you. U don't own this place. 几句评价都架不住，立马原形毕露。
-winterstorm(打酱油的);
2012-2-8(#7270728@0)
A few insignificant and friendly comments."He looked little concerned, not sure what significance it might have." Do you really mean " He looked a little concerned"
"suppressing excitement and patting myself on the back for finding such a genius way to near her" - " way to get near her"
"kicked me down to a new low and made me realize how suck my school was. " - " realize how my school sucked"
-ordinaryone(ok);
2012-2-10{373}(#7276273@0)