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枫下家园 / 人到中年 / 好诗共赏
赵丽华,梨花教主,梨花体创始人。国家一级作家。“鲁迅文学奖”诗歌奖评委 全国“柔刚诗歌奖”评委,
-bigmao(大猫);
2011-10-14
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和《一个人来到田纳西》。能否请您给鉴评一下,遍访名医
我的
头晕
时好时坏
难以去根
-zbeifly(不是爱风尘似被前缘误);
2011-10-14
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一个神经病,好S不S的来写诗; 一群神经病,好S不S的当了评委;
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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被你一说才进去看了看,这种诗我也会写
-shenzhen(nemo);
2011-10-14
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不见得吧,你会敲回车键吗?“梨花体”诗的特点是,是一句话中,随机地敲回车。
-xbhydx(IT 南郭);
2011-10-14
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这事儿不劳我,我不到两岁的儿子就能干
-shenzhen(nemo);
2011-10-14
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所以我们怀疑赵老师的诗是两个人写的。赵老师打字,她儿子敲回车。
-xbhydx(IT 南郭);
2011-10-14
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哇,敢情我和我儿子母子合璧,能创造诗歌界神话!
-shenzhen(nemo);
2011-10-14
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哈哈哈,老哥这才叫老哥,多点这种幽默,少操闲心,多贴点油墨,少看费眼神的.
-bigmouthman(大嘴);
2011-10-14
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Mark了。
-xbhydx(IT 南郭);
2011-10-14
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那 .........我
这
算是
一首好诗
了吧.
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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很不错了。如果“一首好”后面加回车,“诗了吧”写成一行,那么下届鲁迅文学奖就是您的了。
-xbhydx(IT 南郭);
2011-10-14
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看来你对诗挺有研究呀..........
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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诗不就是有话不好好说吗?这个我在行。
-xbhydx(IT 南郭);
2011-10-14
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叫你这么一说,还真是那么回事哈...........
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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有话不好好说,太逗了
-shenzhen(nemo);
2011-10-14
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好诗!读的时候,一种韵律自心底升起。有时间请多写几首,丰富诗坛。
-zbeifly(不是爱风尘似被前缘误);
2011-10-14
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不敢呀,我怕被砖砸晕:)
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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估计你写了会被当诗神,呵呵............
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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来了诗
不诗神
不紧要
大家
喜欢
就好
了
你
喜欢
吗
?
-shenzhen(nemo);
2011-10-14
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加了个问号,破坏了全诗的神韵,画蛇添足了。
-xbhydx(IT 南郭);
2011-10-14
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这小子竟然也许会了打问号!这个不算,等我那天有灵感了,给你们来一首真正好的
-shenzhen(nemo);
2011-10-14
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did you receive my pm ?
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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still no, i guess something went wrong, never mind
-shenzhen(nemo);
2011-10-14
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check this link:
-sr-71(I Would If I Could);
2011-10-14
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喂,你这样不是暴露我隐私???
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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huh?no worries, this is just the link of PM box, every single person has to login and only able to check own msg box though.
-sr-71(I Would If I Could);
2011-10-14
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but why you can check mine? and you posted the link here, so everyone can see my private massege.
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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please don't get me wrong, I can not see your pm at all and no one else can, it's just a link that link to pm box, ppl only be able to see their own PM box, you see yours, i see mine ~ ~
-sr-71(I Would If I Could);
2011-10-14
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oh, oaky, now i know what you mean :-)
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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饭还请不清?
-shenzhen(nemo);
2011-10-14
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everybody clicks on that link will see his/her own PM box, don't worry. (e.g.: i clicked on it, then saw mine).
-lilianliang(彪妹);
2011-10-14
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thanks !
-sr-71(I Would If I Could);
2011-10-14
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np
-lilianliang(彪妹);
2011-10-14
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sorry, i really didn't know.............
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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np! ~ ~
-sr-71(I Would If I Could);
2011-10-14
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饭还请不清? -shenzhen(nemo);
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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i strongly suggest you asked for boxes of chocolate instead, he owe me 2 now, and 2 for you, 2 for her, N for others...... they he can get a wholesale price. LOL
-lilianliang(彪妹);
2011-10-14
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great idea :)
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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relax, relax, 我打开了看到的是我自己的,每个人点了那个连接看到的都是自己的,你要还不满意,我让鸟哥请你吃饭
-shenzhen(nemo);
2011-10-14
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神经病是诗人经常容易犯的一种病,关键是做诗的时候不能犯。
-zbeifly(不是爱风尘似被前缘误);
2011-10-14
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当评委的时候犯后果也很严重啊.............
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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好诗,好诗!一个神经病
好S不S的来写诗
一群神经病
好S不S的当了评委
-wadangonly(vatansoso);
2011-10-14
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果然好诗!
-yoyo23(纯水有香);
2011-10-14
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爽!
-healthy321(领导说:做人要低调.);
2011-10-14
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太兴奋了,我想我们都能成诗人了,还会成为高级级别的诗人。。。。。。
-fly_universe(飞越时空);
2011-10-14
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一手好湿不难,难的是一被子好湿。
-xbhydx(IT 南郭);
2011-10-14
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这也称为"诗人"?
-newhouse(三多);
2011-10-14
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有人说人到中年后,特别是知识妇女们开始喜欢读读诗歌了,看来果然如此啊
-coffeehouses(咖啡);
2011-10-14
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